How to write a Practice-led Research Question / Focus Groups

I've been working on writing my Focus Group Plan, which led me to really think about what I want to find out through my research?
I've been struggling slightly with how to word my Research Question, change and focus it in from my research question last semester.
On this website called www.unconsciousanimation.com I read an article which helps to breakdown how a practice-led research question can be worded.
These are the notes I took down from it, followed by an example of how my research question could be worded:

I think there's still a little bit of development to go until the question is finalized but this has been very helpful!